R (heartbeatfast) wrote in die_frage,
R
heartbeatfast
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"Ich dachte, daß der Artikel nur einige mehr Fakten und Zahlen benötigte. Für ein Paar der Punkte zu begründen. In dem "Führen Frauen anders als Männer?" Abschnitt" zum Beispiel.

I want this sentence to mean "I thought that the article only needed a few more facts and figures. To back up a few of the points. In the "Women lead differently than men?" section for example"

Is it correct, or if not, what changes do I need to make?

Thanks :)
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